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I love the smell of old, battered books
cause they were, when you were
they're steeped in your breath

The air was cleaner
when you were

I didn't manage to be
when your body was
but I feel
like those books
so full of your breath
of your voice
of your soul

I can scratch the door
to the Garden Lodge
with my pain and anger
But the paint under my nails
will be washed soon
I can pour the water from Geneva Lake
into little bottle
and keep it close
to my heart
near this organ

Without this organ I couldn't live
but I could be alive
if I deserve on it

But the shortest way to get to know you
is to hear
to listen to you
Love You
Another poem dedicated to Him...
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BeatlesQueenLedZepp Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
I know it's completely off topic (sorry!), but hw do you add a photo to your writing?
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
You just need to upload the picture (click the green button Upload File...) as if you just wanted to create a simple deviation with a photo or drawing and then click 'Add text...'.

I hope that helps! :la:
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BeatlesQueenLedZepp Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Thanks! :D
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Mary-Aisha Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
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Blueberri2357 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
This is very nice. It sums up well, how possible - or even easy - is to love someone, with whom you even didn't physically share the same planet. (Well, I'm not sure about your age, but it's the way it goes for me - I was born in 1994, and I feel the same as the poem says.) It's a proof that even time can't kill such a great soul. He'll be here forever. :) And I especially like the end: the best we can do is to listen.
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! :love: I was born in 1997 so yes, it does relate to me as well.;) I'm very happy you liked it. :heart:
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Blueberri2357 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
You're welcome. ;)
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Blueberri2357 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Aaand I almost forgot - I love the photo! :D
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MinetHerzog Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
wow :heart:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
Thank you :heart: I've always considered that poem a bit silly but I keep it in my gallery because of such comments :giggle:
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MinetHerzog Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
hahahah cool answer :giggle:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
I know :XD:
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So very beautiful, what a wonderful tribute. :star:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Thank you, dear.:rose:
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome sweetheart!
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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shaharpr Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is just beautiful.. so so so beautiful! and i`m sure he would have loved this poem :sniff: <3
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!:heart:
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PrinceSsCarmilla Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
awwww! This is so beautiful! :faint: It is a crime that he's no longer here! makes me want to cry he would've loved this...he would've loved you...I'm getting all teary...I have an image of you and i going to meet Freddie:faint: I think I'll keep this image close to my heart....
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
I'll tell you something about this poem: I liked it only a few minutes after it was written, then I realized it was rather silly...:XD: I'm glad I decided to leave it in my gallery though... I received such a beautiful comment!:happycry:
And, after all, that's what I feel towards Freddie.:blush:
I have so many images of me meeting Him in my head... each time I kind of reprimand myself for that... I mean, I've never been that type of fangirly teenager who'd scream once she sees some handsome men around... it feels so.. stupid.:XD: I just hope that you know what I mean.:stupidme: And when you say that he'd love me that makes me so happy... it's like I don't trusted myself completly, it's always great to hear such a thing from another person.
We'd have damn a lot of fun together, I know that.:giggle: He would love that... we would love that... and everyone would love each other!:XD: My silly side appears again...:lol:
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PrinceSsCarmilla Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
Don't LOL I have done the SAME thing! With Prince, Syd and even Freddie....in my dreams I kept performing with Prince....marrying Syd over and over againLOL...and being BFF with Freddie...so believe me I know EXACTLY what you mean! And I feel stupid too about it...but to be honest with you I can't help it...I can't even control my imagination....but what I think is beautiful is your love for Freddie...it's so sweet and you shouldn't be ashamed of something like that! And i've never pictured you as the crazy nonsensical fangirl who would rip Freddie's attire off without the smallest inkling of reality or self worth! NEVER! I'd see you as the angel who entered his life in just the moment when he needed you most...to save and not to cling to....you would have fondled him...just like he wanted...needed! I finally read a book on him...so now I feel like I know him better:D yay! So I'll leave you with this sweet image and I hope it fills your heart with love!!!
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
We are really kindred spirits or something... I can feel a true bond with you Monique, even though you're so far way! And it's growing with your every message.:heart:
I'm not even TRYING to control my imagination..:giggle: This is such a sweet image, only you would be able to create something as beautiful as it is... I feel like he's right behind me now, smiling gently (not to show off the teeth!:giggle:)... okay, maybe that's because there are some pictures of him on the wall behind me:XD:
I'm really filled with love now, for You, for Freddie and for all the circumstances which let me make so many fabulous friends all over the world.:faint::heart:
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PrinceSsCarmilla Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
I'm so happy that it did make you that in turn! :squee: You're such a sweet girl...full of love...those around you are very lucky to be graced by your presence...I hope they appreciate you:)
Aside from the pictures...Freddie really is beside you, smiling and consoling you...he lives through you, because you love him so deeply and purely...and as long as you hold him close to your heart he'll live on through you sweetie...:love: :heart: :iconfreddiesweetplz: :love: :heart:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Oh... please tell this to them, they won't believe.:XD: And now I'm sure that YOU won't believe... but I can be really annoying in the long term. I am loyal.. and caring... but I have also many, many flaws on my character that make me quite a tiresome person to be with at times. If they appreciate me... I'm afraid that most of the people I'm surrounded by here don't know me at all. How can they appreciate me then? I have a feeling that only here on dA (and with Daria maybe..) I'm really myself, it's still not the perfect Zel but I'm not aiming to be flawless... it's just the person that I feel comfortable with. And, knowing that being me I can make you feel something positive, that is a so amazing!:love:
He is alive and he keeps me alive.:heart: I was born to love him!:giggle:
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PrinceSsCarmilla Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
I think that's the reason you're perfect! You see just by being YOU and admitting to your flaws you're able to learn and guide others and give them strength and positivity throughout...that's why I love you! I've been surrounded by narcissistic and prideful beings who revel in their glory and have little to do with others...although not entirely but alot...and it brings me despair to be belittled and have the ever feeling of guilt looming over my head...it's awful...it's stiffling...it's murder...you never make one feel that...so those around you are blessed to have such sunshine eminate from you...they should be proud and thankful for it! If' I knew them i would pinch them and make them realize it! FOOLS!
You were sweety...he would have LOVED you! I'm certain of this! You wouldn't have clung to him for materialistic need but for affectionate needs...LOVE, LOVE and LOVE...that's all I see when I think of you and him.
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
People are cruel, unfeeling and full of hate. Even... unhuman... being the representative of the human kind does not mean to be the right.. I just can't understand WHY such things happen.. why everyone is not wishing the best to each other.. everything would be just so... easy.
Well said, it IS the murder. When I hear such things from the people or, what is the worst, from the people of my own family I feel like I'm dying on the inside. They say that's because they want everything the best for me... they fail, though. Destroying my self-esteem and the rests of respect I have for myself... but I realized that there ARE such Angels like you my dear, I've found them on this planet thanks to the best coincidence of my life. Freddie made me stay here on dA... and dA makes me want to love him to the end of my life! I think that he sent you and all my other friends from Heaven, to save me. Thank you Freddie...:happycry:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Oh... please tell this to them, they won't believe.:XD: And now I'm sure that YOU won't believe... but I can be really annoying in the long term. I am loyal.. and caring... but I have also many, many flaws on my character that make me quite a tiresome person to be with at times. If they appreciate me... I'm afraid that most of the people I'm surrounded by here don't know me at all. How can they appreciate me then? I have a feeling that only here on dA (and with Daria maybe..) I'm really myself, it's still not the perfect Zel but I'm not aiming to be flawless... it's just the person that I feel comfortable with. And, knowing that being me I can make you feel something positive, that is a so amazing!:love:

He is alive and he keeps me alive. I was born to love him!:giggle::heart:
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PrinceSsCarmilla Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
how sweet..it's lovely...I'm gonna cry...
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Thank you so much, darling.:heart: I can't thank you enough.:happycry:
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DoubleHeart97 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Student
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
I'm glad you like it!:huggle:
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DoubleHeart97 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Student
I love it~~
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
Yay! That's so awesome!!!:woohoo:
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LilyOfTheValley1234 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
first of all: the picture is fred-tastic... lol Second of all the poem is great :D
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Thank you, I'm very glad you like it!:squee:
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LilyOfTheValley1234 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Np! :D
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MandyMullins2 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Oh my....this is so beautiful! So beautiful! :heart: :tears:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Thank you!
You really made me smile.
Your comment means for me so much, it's a real honour to hear it from you:tighthug:
I love this photo, I think it perfectly fits this poem...:)
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MandyMullins2 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
You're welcome! You have a gift :heart:. You've captured a lot of how I feel about him as well :huggle:
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
That's so great!
I feel there are so many unnamed things. By matching words together I can express my feelings a lot better. That's the sense of poetry, for me.
And I'm happy I've captured it, that means very much to me:)
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MandyMullins2 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
I know...writing is an outlet for me because I am really not good at speaking. I end up doing a lot of "umms" and "uhhhs" and "mmkays".

I have a couple of fanfictions in my head that I'm too shy to write...I've never written a real life fic before, and both are SHAMELESS Mary Sues :blush:.

I'll tell you about them if you like...I actually think one sounds better than the other.
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
I have this problem too:hug:
Of course, I like!:D
I'mm going to read your literature, but I've got to go to school in ten minutes:)
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MandyMullins2 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
Yay!

Oh I haven't written them yet...I just wanted ta tell you what fics were cooking in my head :giggle:.

I do have other literature you can read if you want, in my gallery ^^.
I warn you, some of it's kinda weird...like it's got certain weird...elements :blush:.

Not porn, though :).
I don't like porn.
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
I mean I'll also read your other literature soon:)
Ok:XD:
Bye!
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