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I love the smell of old, battered books
cause they were, when you were
they're steeped in your breath

The air was cleaner
when you were

I didn't manage to be
when your body was
but I feel
like those books
so full of your breath
of your voice
of your soul

I can scratch the door
to the Garden Lodge
with my pain and anger
But the paint under my nails
will be washed soon
I can pour the water from Geneva Lake
into little bottle
and keep it close
to my heart
near this organ

Without this organ I couldn't live
but I could be alive
if I deserve on it

But the shortest way to get to know you
is to hear
to listen to you
Love You
Another poem dedicated to Him...
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BeatlesQueenLedZepp Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
I know it's completely off topic (sorry!), but hw do you add a photo to your writing?
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
You just need to upload the picture (click the green button Upload File...) as if you just wanted to create a simple deviation with a photo or drawing and then click 'Add text...'.

I hope that helps! :la:
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BeatlesQueenLedZepp Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Thanks! :D
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Mary-Aisha Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
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Blueberri2357 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
This is very nice. It sums up well, how possible - or even easy - is to love someone, with whom you even didn't physically share the same planet. (Well, I'm not sure about your age, but it's the way it goes for me - I was born in 1994, and I feel the same as the poem says.) It's a proof that even time can't kill such a great soul. He'll be here forever. :) And I especially like the end: the best we can do is to listen.
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! :love: I was born in 1997 so yes, it does relate to me as well.;) I'm very happy you liked it. :heart:
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Blueberri2357 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
You're welcome. ;)
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Blueberri2357 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Aaand I almost forgot - I love the photo! :D
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MinetHerzog Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
wow :heart:
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